To gear up for the end of the term, we have another poem in progress for you, this time by Aberystwyth University's own Peter Barry.
Enjoy!
ContemPo at Aberystwyth
Tuesday, May 21, 2013
Wednesday, March 27, 2013
Peter Barry Biography
Hello!
Continuing with our "Living Spaces" series, we have a new poet for you, Professor Peter Barry.
Below is the biography for him. Stay tuned for his first excerpt.
Enjoy!
Continuing with our "Living Spaces" series, we have a new poet for you, Professor Peter Barry.
Below is the biography for him. Stay tuned for his first excerpt.
Enjoy!
Monday, February 18, 2013
Katherine Stansfield post 2
You're going to be glad you stuck with us! Here we have the next installment in the "Living Spaces" series. It will not disappoint!
Panda poem installment two
Monday, February 4, 2013
Katherine Stansfield post 1
Hello! Continuing on our "Living Spaces" series, we have Katherine Stansfield's first set of notes as she worked on a poem that you, lucky reader, will eventually get to read. Not many people get to see a poem in progress!
Notes
on some notes that might become a poem
12th December, 2012
I’m quite particular about notebooks. I use
an A5, unlined black Moleskine, take it everywhere, and write hurried notes in
it. I find that the quicker I write in the notebook, the more useful the notes
are. If I slow down, I start to self-edit. These notes are sometimes single
words (recent examples are ‘beckon’, ‘hoopla’ and ‘shilly’) or phrases that
appeal because of the sound (e.g. ‘I post coats home’); these may well go into
poems later. Also rushed onto the page (perhaps a bit more leisurely in this
category) are ideas that I think have ‘got legs’, i.e. good subject matter for
a poem (e.g. ‘Calista wants to eat firelighters’). Sometimes I’ll make a lot of notes at once which cluster
around the same subject, and these will form the body of a poem quite quickly,
retaining the order and form, even whole lines when they migrate from the
notebook to an A4 page. Very rarely do I find that a poem ‘writes itself’,
which many poets speak of, although recently I had great success with a poem
which due to the speedy clustering of note-making made use of some interesting
internal movement or narrative, by which I mean I felt like the note-making,
free from editing, allowed me to break out of narrative structuring patterns I
suddenly (through writing this poem) realised I used. Someone who reads my work
regularly, on seeing this poem, commented that it felt very different to most
other poems I’d written. I sent it off to Magma,
and the editor said that when he came to it in the submissions pile it was
distinct, and he promptly accepted it. Huffington Post in the UK filmed me
reading it for their website: you can view the video here:
But this is rare. I go through a great deal
of re-writing, crossings out, re-ordering, cutting back, to get the final poem.
Sometimes that takes place in the ‘safe’ space of the notebook, the site of the
original notes. I will ‘work up’ a notebook page quite heavily, so it’s almost
illegible, before moving out to A4, which, for me, represents a commitment to
the poem. If I’m on A4, it could fail, whereas in the notebook it’s just notes,
just ideas. Running out of space in the notebook sometimes forces me onto A4
before I’m really ready. I’ll often leave a long gap between making the
original note and going back to it to develop it. Sometimes weeks, sometimes
years. This usually means that there aren’t any pages next to the original
notes to spread out onto as part of working up a poem. I like to cram things in
and keep the same notebook going for as long as possible. Plus, blank space in
a notebook, even around good words, fills me with dread. I’m compelled to fill
it in. I work by hand on A4 through several drafts (usually a minimum of three
or four), over the course of a few days (I try not to leave too long a gap
between drafts once I get to this stage of writing) before moving on to a
computer document.
Here are some notes I made in the notebook about
two months ago:
There’s no such thing as pandas – all men in suits. End on – they’re having you on. [crossed out here is ‘It was Newsround that’] I cut my teeth watching Newsround. Epiphany – and then I saw/knew. [this last sentence is in a different coloured pen so I’ve added it later]
The initial motivation for writing these notes came from seeing the popular video of a panda jumping in shock when her offspring sneezed very loudly:
The panda’s reaction made it look unreal to
me, suddenly, like a person in a panda suit, and then I thought that all pandas
look a bit like that: overly large and somehow pretend as an animal. And that
made me think of Newsround which I watched avidly as a child. The ‘and finally’
sections of the program, in which light-hearted news stories countered whatever
horrors had just been presented in the main news section, seem, in my memory,
to consist almost entirely of panda stories. Pandas arriving at zoos, pandas
not mating, pandas pandas pandas.
I really like the original image and the
‘I cut my teeth on Newround’ line. Sometimes I go off things once they’re
written down and they never make it out of the notebook. Notes will often
include instructions to myself, like here: ‘end on’ and ‘epiphany’. As a writer
I’m not hugely interested in poems which announce their own construction as
texts (though I enjoy reading them), so these ‘notes to self’ within the notes
always get removed once the poem reaches the A4 stage.
I don’t often have a conscious sense of
form for a poem at note stage, though line breaks can appear here in a quite
definite sense, through awareness of sound, which then shape the rest of the
poem. With this poem, I really wanted to have something to enter the current Magma poetry competition which has a
special category for poems under ten lines. None of my poems are ever that
short and I wanted to force myself to do it (plus, rather cynically, I was
hoping less poets would enter that one). I had this panda poem in mind for the
competition so I’ve been thinking of it in terms of being ten lines or less. As
I type this the deadline is four days away and I’m not sure I’ll have it
finished it time as deadlines don’t help me write poems (although, as I write
this, I know that what I really mean is that if I haven’t written for a while –
the current situation, due to teaching – it’s painful to start and I don’t
really have the courage at the moment). Maybe writing
this for Contempo will help?
Wednesday, January 2, 2013
Katherine Stansfield Biography
Hello!
Welcome to the beginning of our "Living Spaces" series. This series will follow a poet through the process of creating a poem. You'll get insight into the poet's thoughts from the first inkling of a poem to its potential creation. It's a study on the importance of the creative process over the necessity to create verse. This is a rare glimpse into the creative mind and we're excited to launch this forum.
Below is the biography for our first poet, Dr. Katherine Stansfield. Later, you'll get her first excerpt.
Enjoy!
Welcome to the beginning of our "Living Spaces" series. This series will follow a poet through the process of creating a poem. You'll get insight into the poet's thoughts from the first inkling of a poem to its potential creation. It's a study on the importance of the creative process over the necessity to create verse. This is a rare glimpse into the creative mind and we're excited to launch this forum.
Below is the biography for our first poet, Dr. Katherine Stansfield. Later, you'll get her first excerpt.
Enjoy!
Wednesday, December 12, 2012
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